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Road Rage

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She's screaming inside, adrenaline's racing through her body to the beat of her heart's shouts. She wants to scream the car to its limits until it crashes and consumes her, stopping the shouts and roars in one sharp, violent break. A corner of her existence speaks up and she stops the car with vicious pulls and thumps. She's out and running while the car is still rolling, an animal scream tearing through her lips, leaving destruction in its path. She builds up her pace as she thunders down the hill and she's halfway up the next one before she collapses in the middle of the shredded scenery of her head.


An eternity passes in waves of grass and leaves, whispering everything to her in a language of their own. When the sky begins to lighten again, she shivers. Sitting up, her breath has an air of finality to it as she moves away from last night.
Do you like it? What about the end bit, does it add more or detract?

If I was fired up enough to push a car to its limits, and I saw another car coming and speed up, headed straight for it; I think there would be a sort of adrenaline about sealing your own fate, about everything ending right there because you told it to. But then I would think of the people in the other car and I couldn't end their lives as well.
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julimoendchen's avatar
wow this is awesome!! love it !! i think the adds to the feeling of suspense!